| 2008-02-06 02:19:46 |
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I think you should do a part 2 when Emily is in college and they meet again - maybe they'll get married |
| 2008-02-12 01:07:32 |
Temptations of a Substitute
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That was sooo sad......i really cried at the end! |
| 2008-02-26 05:18:01 |
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I think the story was great and all, but I was a little annoyed at the use of the word "prick"....there ARE other words for penis, you know? Sorry, but jeez it was irritating. |
| 2008-02-27 01:13:07 |
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it was good the way it was. a second part would ruin it |
| 2008-02-27 18:32:48 |
Temptations of a Substitute
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wow! Can you not make another story just life this. But they stay together! Try to figure it out. I fucking love this story |