| 2007-02-28 07:11:17 |
Naruto
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i really like it but just work on your writing a little bit but it is better then your teen titan ones but i liked those too so don't get me wrong but you need to have so more stuff like whips and restains and stuff like that i would really like to read about naruto getting whipped for looking at another girl or maybe have hinata fuck him with a strap on that would be so hot |
| 2007-02-28 12:01:00 |
Naruto
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for the first reader I will rewrite Naruto but after I get done with the second part. |
| 2007-02-28 14:26:24 |
Naruto
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sfdrty |
| 2007-02-28 22:19:45 |
Naruto
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I love the 7:11 reader, gettin kinda kinky over there. lol. Me personally, I liked this better than the Teen Titans. Keep up the good work Poss. |
| 2007-03-01 00:23:25 |
Naruto
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=] do more but get more detailed and more clear the writing was a little confusin lol it was good tho id say it was a 7/10 please do more you are a good writer but can be alot better. |