| 2007-03-14 01:50:20 |
33 LEERS, FEARS, JEERS, 'N TEARS 34 WORST THIRST FOR FIRST
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good interesting story. gave it 8/10. would have gone higher with a bit of sex to make it more interesting. |
| 2007-03-17 15:35:08 |
33 LEERS, FEARS, JEERS, 'N TEARS 34 WORST THIRST FOR FIRST
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the title sounds gay and emo like |
| 2007-03-17 15:37:27 |
33 LEERS, FEARS, JEERS, 'N TEARS 34 WORST THIRST FOR FIRST
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and also like you went looking through the dictionary for words that rhymed with 'eers' |
| 2007-03-17 15:38:07 |
33 LEERS, FEARS, JEERS, 'N TEARS 34 WORST THIRST FOR FIRST
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I would have called it '33 beers' and had it about a slut that got drunk.... would have been much better. |
| 2007-03-01 05:36:09 |
A Teen Craving
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you can tell from your story that you have very little experience... probably still a virgin |