| 2007-03-07 14:04:59 |
Latin Neighbor
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Calm down go and jerk off then write a lengthy more detail story as this one sucks |
| 2007-03-07 17:28:02 |
Latin Neighbor
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Come on, guys. This isn't a bad story. It could have been longer, but it wasn't bad. One thing that unnerved me was Dirtywriter's habit of inserting commas where they don't belong. I saw at least 50 commas that were totally out of place. |
| 2007-03-07 17:57:23 |
Latin Neighbor
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not to bad could have been a bit longer. maybe a bit more teasing should have done the trick |
| 2007-03-09 00:14:00 |
Latin Neighbor
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yeah too much commas 6/10 |
| 2007-03-10 04:30:59 |
Latin Neighbor
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too much commas? your marking him down for that? Wow your all fags.. the story is great, it doesn't have to be 10 pages long to be enjoyable... in fact I would argue those stories suck because I just wanna blow a load and be done with it, not fool around for 3 hours reading... |