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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-03-12 06:09:49 | Not So Ordinary Life | Hey Lumpkin Gangsta, you wrote: "For those of you that don't know me." That's wrong. It's "For those of you who don't know me." Learn how to write in English. Your spelling and writing style sucks. Better not quit your day job --- if you have one. |
| 2007-03-12 13:34:50 | Not So Ordinary Life | all of these people who bitch about grammar and the way a story is written piss me off. have they never heard of a thing called creative liecnse? just ignore then man. however my self i did not care for the generall idea of the story it is told well but i could have done with out those laws at the begening. it would have been better to to explain them later on. peace and chicken grease. |
| 2007-03-12 14:35:28 | Not So Ordinary Life | great writing! get some younger kids into it in the next one. 10/10 |
| 2007-03-12 15:29:55 | Not So Ordinary Life | great story over all next chapter plz a few grammer tweaks needed vut nothing to get upset about |
| 2007-03-12 20:09:41 | Not So Ordinary Life | Random Reader... You wrote: Hey lumpkin gangsta, you wrote: "for those of you that don't know me." that's wrong. it's "for those of you who don't know me." On the contrary... the way that Lumps wrote it is ACTUALLY the correct form of grammar for that particular sentence... YOU learn your English. Other than that.... Work on your writing skills and it might be a classic on xnxx stories.! Peace! Pagandude |