| 2007-03-15 16:09:04 |
Not So Ordinary Life
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very good,as i fuck my family all the time i can really relate,some younger kids though would be great 9/10 |
| 2007-03-17 23:52:19 |
Not So Ordinary Life
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Sorry but its a little too farfetched and the sex wasnt descriptive enough. Try making it into 1 long story. You have a great idea on your hands. Keep up the good work! |
| 2007-03-20 00:40:40 |
Not So Ordinary Life
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wierd |
| 2007-03-20 05:49:23 |
Not So Ordinary Life
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Good story so far. I hope that the dog gets more than just a mention. It would be hot to hear more about Amanda does with it. Some younger kids would be nice, too. Neighbors or cousins, maybe 11 to 13 years old. |
| 2007-04-02 08:18:06 |
Not So Ordinary Life
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great story...where are the doggies!! |