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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-04-19 23:23:15 | Naruto 3 | I HOPE THEY HAVE A NARUTO 4! |
| 2007-03-11 17:21:28 | First Touch? | horrible writing |
| 2007-03-11 22:54:56 | First Touch? | absolute crap.get a life |
| 2007-03-12 04:45:26 | First Touch? | make it longer and it would of been ok. 1/10 |
| 2007-03-12 16:50:18 | First Touch? | It's written like an excited child talks... Almost like rambling... Work on that, and fix it, then repost it after you do a bit of planning |