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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-03-12 22:27:42 | First Touch? | After while John started yelling im going to cum i stop sucking him and he came all over my face i loved it. That sentence summarizes all of the problems that this story has. Overall, there is no detail, no character, no foreplay, no relationship. |
| 2007-03-13 04:36:14 | First Touch? | while the other comments have some truth in them eg short, rambling, no foreplay etc. It did have an instant sence of urgency and raw sexual passion about it which some of the longer stories often lack. |
| 2007-03-13 19:03:32 | First Touch? | that was grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr8t |
| 2007-03-11 09:34:13 | Harry Potter 11 Thankful Thanksgiving | great story write more 10/10 |
| 2007-03-11 14:28:33 | Harry Potter 11 Thankful Thanksgiving | well that was horrible. barely based on HP anymore and far too short. |