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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-03-16 00:13:47 | Loving Courtney | When I first read “Loving Courtney”, I was very pleased that we had a new writer who could develop a story without the normal rape and homosexual themes that proliferate this site. George has taken a difficult story and made it into a romantic, loving exchange between a thirty-year-old man and a young girl. Bravo! I would be proud to sign my name to this work. Keep it going. I must agree with 03-15-07 - 14:42, who stated, “Two words buddy. Character development. You just jumped straight in there. Give us some background depth of who these people are.” However for a first work, this is a good effort. There were a few words, which were not spelled correctly. Most were transpositions due to fast typing. Slow down a little. I will send you a few notes through your personal mail. Dave |
| 2007-03-16 00:56:08 | Loving Courtney | Glad you read and liked the story, Dave. And you're right...sometimes I type too fast. Part two is in the works and i hope it is as well received as this one was. Contact me on the personal message feature. |
| 2007-03-16 02:54:17 | Loving Courtney | By far the very best story I have read out of dozens on this site. Quite believable and descriptive. Love for a welcome change in lieu of raw sex, yt quite erotic and certainly arousing. Kudos to this writer. Want to see more of his work, but do not know how he can possibly top th is for pure heat! |
| 2007-03-16 05:55:23 | Loving Courtney | This would have to be one of the best storys that i have read in a long long time. It was beautifully written. Keep writing more parts & i will keep reading them. 10/10 |
| 2007-03-16 20:05:58 | Loving Courtney | finally, a story about true love instead of just fucking girls. 10/10 wonderful! |