| 2007-07-04 00:05:35 |
Alice Is Pregnant 5
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the grammar does not need work. its actually quite suberb when compared to the others stories posted here. "realism" is not important, but the sex bombardment was a tad bit much. less scenes but greater detail would be more successful |
| 2007-09-13 16:08:34 |
Alice Is Pregnant 5
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drainednuts you are a fucking idiot go and jack off if you can |
| 2007-10-04 15:07:29 |
Alice Is Pregnant 5
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Oh Alice lets get married and fuck forever maybe 3 or 4 or 6 kids whatever |
| 2007-03-15 15:56:49 |
43 FIRST PLACE GRACE 44 FRISKY 'N RISKY
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What th hell stupid |
| 2007-03-16 23:36:38 |
43 FIRST PLACE GRACE 44 FRISKY 'N RISKY
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This guy just doesn't have a clue! |