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2007-03-16 13:13:29 Actually, I said the gates to the city were iron. I never mentioned what the gates to the castle were made of. In my mind, they were ornate (likely made by one of the many guilds mentioned above) but as I said, this chapter was not my favorite. It just didn't flow from me. In my mind, the gates were decorative and ornamental...not so much for protection as for tradition. But I was so frustrated by the time I got to that part I just wanted to get this chapter overwith. I promise you and all my readers that the next chapter will have much more depth.
2007-03-16 16:38:21 first of all, i'm sorry i haven't given any comments earlier on but that's only because I wanted to read al ten chapters before I judged it and I must say...... ****ing brilliant!!
I can't say i've ever read anything like it!
the way you describe the emotione, passion, hate, lust and crulety..... brilliant!!
you keep on saying you want comments on how to write a better story, well just keep on writing the things that turn you on like you've been doing with these chapters and I seriously think you could turn proffessional
2007-03-16 16:59:09 Well, thank you....whoever you are. And I'm glad you like the series!
2007-03-17 04:06:22 A so-so effort. Don't why anybody would get all excited about this. Let it end.
2007-03-17 17:07:06 Wow... Well, I've read the entire story. I just have to say; I am amazed that something this incredible is on a website, and not being published. I would almost say it's the stuff a Harlequin's made of, but it has more class than a Harlequin. This is truly a beautiful story, and I can honestly say I feel like I'm getting a sneak preview of an up and coming published work.

Definately looking forward to more. Keep it up ^^

-Rachel


P.S. Guy who said this "A so-so effort. don't why anybody would get all excited about this. let it end." is a douche. Fin.

P.P.S. Let it NEVER end =D
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