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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2008-01-29 16:38:41 | Ashley And Maggie | pretty good, a bit too short |
| 2008-01-30 21:02:48 | Ashley And Maggie | Why so short what about the other gurl |
| 2007-03-16 09:00:59 | I'll be the first to admit that this chapter is a bit uneventful. I apologize for that. I had a bad case of writer's block and the whole thing was a bit forced. However, I already have some good ideas flowing for the next chapter so just stick with me. | |
| 2007-03-16 09:49:42 | NICE, SHORT BUT NICE COULD HAVE USED SOME "MOTHER" + "DOUTHER" ACTION IN THE COTCH WHITH 2 OF THE GAYS |
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| 2007-03-16 12:43:51 | Being lead by the reader and not the writer/story, showed, but you got round it quite neatly. Small criticism ? Castle would have had stout wooden gates, not iron. The portcullis would be in iron. A great tale - if it were real, I'd want to visit the country. Bring on the next chapter. xxx |