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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-03-17 17:34:37 | family camping trip_(0) | A good effort for a first attempt - BUT YOU MUST GET IT SPELL CHECKED. xxx |
| 2007-03-17 22:17:44 | family camping trip_(0) | good, storyline is very good, but please do something about the spelling |
| 2007-03-17 22:35:46 | family camping trip_(0) | next story,try typing it with your eyes open! you even spell the same word differently in the same sentence. good concept though,try again. 5/10 just for concept thanx |
| 2007-03-18 23:44:53 | family camping trip_(0) | Well, yeah, you gave us fair warning about the spelling, but read a "regular" story and see how they break it up with paragraphs, and how they use quotes. If you did that part better it would offset the bad spelling somewhat -- otherwise pretty good, gave it a 6... |
| 2008-04-16 01:04:50 | family camping trip_(0) | spelling,what spelling? go back to school!!!! |