| 2007-03-17 08:25:34 |
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yeh just goes to show , a story needs proper dialogue. (and also goes to show ya shouldnt write ur story in first person) |
| 2007-05-01 20:47:27 |
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you are an extremely talented writer
i think you should write an erotic novel |
| 2007-07-10 15:03:06 |
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it was wonderful and you amazed me .. i hadnt seen such a seducing story before i read yours .. |
| 2007-07-11 15:50:58 |
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blows |
| 2007-10-01 23:22:32 |
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it was good...very good |