| 2007-03-25 00:31:55 |
Learning the basics
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dont listen to these losers. Great story! More more |
| 2007-03-24 01:28:19 |
John's Little Family Affair 4
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that was so hot.....10/10 |
| 2007-03-24 02:54:36 |
John's Little Family Affair 4
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dude u'r trying way too hard man |
| 2007-03-24 06:27:17 |
John's Little Family Affair 4
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good story 10/10 |
| 2007-03-24 08:32:44 |
John's Little Family Affair 4
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Good story, but as someone else wrote, it did look as if the author tried a bit too hard to make the story red-hot. because of that, the story actually suffered, but it's still worth an 8/10. |