| 2007-03-28 11:20:29 |
John's Little Family Affair 6
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excellent, although the random tattos would personally, turn me off. i dont think i would like to nail a chick with bitch whore on her vagina. stomach maybe but not vag. other than tht fantastc chapter...awaiting #7 |
| 2007-03-28 11:54:05 |
John's Little Family Affair 6
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that was too long. i got bored and skipped heaps of the story. plus it took 6 whole chapters just to see someone fucked. 6/10 |
| 2007-03-28 20:28:22 |
John's Little Family Affair 6
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Great. Keep on writing. |
| 2007-03-30 13:03:59 |
John's Little Family Affair 6
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sick |
| 2007-04-01 15:06:34 |
John's Little Family Affair 6
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this was a great series dont end it there please keep it going |