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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-03-29 23:26:09 | Chapter one | im not sure why it doesn't paragraph it when it loads i have them as word doc's and they are paragraphed no offense taken and i hope that you'll continue reading while i try to figure out how to load them in properly...thanks again |
| 2007-06-29 11:31:20 | Chapter one | hmm.. how to put it into your language.. okay.. you need to use some paragraphs it's really easy to lose your place when you dont use periods its also very confusing because you dont know when the sentence ends or starts your shpelink aslo sukz balsz i think you need to revise. |
| 2007-09-10 23:57:23 | Chapter one | Sorry, I just got new glasses and had a real problem trying to make out where one part ended and the next began! Also had problem breathing between paragraphs! If you write another one then let us know beforehand & we can book our coffins with the undertaker and read the story from inside, then with loss of breath they can stick the lid on! |
| 2007-03-26 09:43:52 | Don't You Fake It [Part. 1] | To be continued! don't bother, this is a load of crap, 2/10 |
| 2007-03-26 11:14:29 | Don't You Fake It [Part. 1] | I liked it. Please keep it up. |