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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-03 05:54:30 | risedale secrets..edited | try reading it aloud next time no flow don't submit yet rework until its smooth |
| 2007-04-03 13:33:40 | risedale secrets..edited | ok, i have this stupid microsoft works it sucks really bad. |
| 2007-08-23 10:22:10 | risedale secrets..edited | MSworks sucks use openoffice, it's also free and open source (no spyware) |
| 2007-04-02 12:38:27 | risedale secrets 2 | i liked wood-shop myself when i was in school.i never had an adventure like you did though. so do you have any more class sex sessions to write about? hope so. 9/10 thanx |
| 2007-04-02 14:41:16 | risedale secrets 2 | Let me start out by saying that I did like your story. Now with that said...for a 21 year old male from England it would seem as though you could write in English. plz should be please Do you know the difference between 'are' and 'our?" Learn to capitalize the letter 'i' and the first words of sentences. Proof read every word yourself a second time before you get in a hurry to post your work. As I said...I liked your story. Write more. Proofread. Capitalize. |