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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-02 17:40:28 | risedale secrets 2 | If i re-read something then it seems fine as i know what it is meant to say, my mind adds it in for me. I normally spot it too late. I am sorry for the "plz" bad habbit from chatt rooms. |
| 2007-04-02 17:44:22 | risedale secrets 2 | Ok next story i promise to go over completely with a dictionary. My parents were in the R.A.F so i moved around alot, I never learnt to spell and my cirrent job doesnt really need me to write. Yes i shall write more, of my "sessions" but i would like to know if you want the same character? Kim? p.s what is proof reading? |
| 2007-04-05 16:28:32 | risedale secrets 2 | tight...10/10 it cut all the bullshit....nice |
| 2007-07-03 01:40:39 | risedale secrets 2 | Our not are... it just messes up the flow |
| 2007-04-02 11:43:19 | The doctor visit | A bit short of cumming. Part 2 please. |