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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-11 16:01:21 | Don't tease your dad | fair story. sounds like you're all setup for a series,huh? 8/10 thanx |
| 2007-04-11 16:38:25 | Don't tease your dad | I FUCK BOTH MY STEP DAD AN STEP BRO MMMMM....il-pam |
| 2007-04-11 17:13:38 | Don't tease your dad | Write more. Go back and tell about some adventures when you were still 12. Love it. |
| 2007-04-11 19:35:28 | Don't tease your dad | not that it was a bad concept or anything....i think you should add more substance to the story...try reading some good stories....u might find them on this site...and see how thoughts & actions are put into words ...also don't just make it happen in one para...add more paragraphs....apart from that it was ok...6/10...could do better....maybe the next one? |
| 2007-04-11 20:52:34 | Don't tease your dad | more! more! come on that was awsome!!!!!!! |