| 2007-04-16 10:38:09 |
Tiffy goes Wild
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Thanks for you comment teddy. I did realize it was getting long and even thought about breaking it into multiple posts, but it was all part of the same scenario. I introduced the "Chapters" as a way for people to be able to start it and then come back to it later and have a reference point to pick up at again as I sometimes do with the longer stories here. Looking back on it the "Chapter 5" maker was definitely not needed. |
| 2007-04-17 02:45:00 |
Tiffy goes Wild
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your welcome and i look forward to seeing more stories from u |
| 2007-04-17 17:07:22 |
Tiffy goes Wild
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Very nice (most of it). I wanted to give it a 10/10 all along, but u ruined the whole thing in the end. The farting and pissing part was still acceptable, but the shit part was too much. I wanted to give it a 0 than. U should have mentioned it has scatology. But most of it was amazing, so gave 8/10 finally. You r good, carry on. From my experience, i advise u not to make a series. |
| 2007-04-17 19:19:16 |
Tiffy goes Wild
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Thanks for you comment, however, the reason I did not include the "scat" part as a themes was that my inclusion of it was not sexual in anyway, just the ultimate defilement and defeat. |
| 2007-05-29 15:35:25 |
Tiffy goes Wild
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Really juvinile like a kid getting his first beating of the meat. Too long and your brain got wacker as you continued your rated so low I could not find it on this page but something like a minus 10 |