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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-08-03 23:43:58 | Tiffy goes Wild | kinda nasty at the end but other wise was good |
| 2007-08-06 03:27:48 | Tiffy goes Wild | I think this is one of the best written stories I've read here... Good Job! Maybe, in the future you could write something with FemDom, say over a hetro male.. forced to take her giant strap and all her freinds as well? Yummy.. I cant wait .. you are a gifted writer. 10/10 |
| 2007-09-03 18:02:52 | Tiffy goes Wild | It was too long. The beginning lacked excitement. I think a better subplot would of been for Jared to actually film all of this. It would of added an extra twist that could of lead to a better ending. Other than that it was a great story and it flowed well. The writing was great I give it a 9/10 |
| 2007-09-21 22:36:06 | Tiffy goes Wild | All in all an excellent story. the beginning was a bit tedious in detail, but your grammar and style is well above average, so i stayed with it. a few minor errors i.e. ...as they shameless(ly) gyrate... ...half the night (or) have a benjamin... and so on. personally, i liked tiffy's about face near the end. 2 thumbs up. keep writing. |
| 2007-09-30 11:48:19 | Tiffy goes Wild | i am still a virgin and i mastervate every night. if anyone in indiana wants to take to cherry of a 16 years old girl tell me. i promise that i'll fuck u good and hard. |