sexstories.com
Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-02 00:28:42 | Shelly Shocked | This hot I would love to have been in his place sucking that cock |
| 2007-05-02 01:19:44 | Shelly Shocked | I liked it. Could use some more seperation; break up the mega-paragraphs. Write another and give it a read-through or two, change and edit whatever is needed, then submit it. Good story. |
| 2007-05-02 13:56:10 | Shelly Shocked | loved this story. i closed my door at work and put my calls on hold and beat off!! please write another one? 10/10~~ id give you a higher rating if possible. |
| 2007-05-02 14:10:32 | Shelly Shocked | Good beginning but the end is all bullshit. It would have been a good story without the sucking of a shit-covered cock. Can't believe that it is done not even in any of the many adult films that I have seen. Gave it a 4/10. |
| 2007-05-02 14:46:59 | Shelly Shocked | good beginning good ending too. good allaround story. the grammer is not perfect but the story more then makes up for it. 10/10 thanks man and keep writeing more stories. |