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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-03-25 18:26:07 | Death by fucking ch. 14 | another great stroy |
| 2006-01-01 02:23:09 | Death by fucking ch. 15 | I'm still enjoying the twists in the story as it developes and still not comming. My fear is at this stage that if all is to return to "normal" by the last chapter all the E and D generation and possibly Andrew will have to die. that would be sad. We'll see? |
| 2004-08-09 12:16:14 | Death by fucking ch. 16 | perfect in every way |
| 2006-01-11 10:55:02 | Death by fucking ch. 16 | Astounding. I am going to give it a half-hour before starting on the next chapter while I get out my Joanne Woodward photos! |
| 2004-04-13 03:12:54 | Death by fucking ch. 17 | Okay, this story started off cute, funny, and romantic. Then they had kids that were "telempathetic", which could just mean the dad is really in touch with his children. No harm in that. The telepathic twist started off cute, and I'm a fan of MC stories so I was curious where it could lead. As of this chapter, this story has now left this world. It's beyond fiction, beyond science-fiction. It's totally unbelievable. This story has had its twists and turns to accomodate a variety of fantasies, but the author is losing readers at this point. I'll keep reading just to find out whether this is actually going somewhere. One thing the story does have going for it is that it has developed an interesting mix of characters with varying relationships among them. Since the introduction of telepathy I've been trying to figure out what the author is going to do with this. Never introduce something outlandish that your readers won't accept unless you are prepared to do something with that theme. Your reader base will accept any superhuman ability and wacky invention if they are integral to the core story. Just don't keep them in suspense too long. |