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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-04-01 00:30:07 | Death by fucking ch. 22 (end) | A terrific story. Maybe you're a mainstream author? What will happen to the world in 50 years? 100 years? 1000 years? How long will New Man exist? Seems like there are lots of stories here! |
| 2004-04-02 10:17:09 | Death by fucking ch. 22 (end) | My god man, that was incredible. Not just the sex(which was decent but not stellar), but the fact that I just spent four hours reading this - and skipping the sex scenes! I agree with "Outstanding", you were definately channeling Heinlein there - just drop the "bleeding-heart liberal" bit(TANSTAAFL!) and cut out some of the excess sex and i'd figure it *was* him. Seriously man, start writing real literature and you could wind up doing VERY well for yourself - and even if you don't, your mother will REALLY enjoy her copies of your writing ;) |
| 2004-04-04 07:27:14 | Death by fucking ch. 22 (end) | Loved it, especially the small tits. Fantacizing about human evolution is always incredible. Reminds me of the start of Star Trek. I have always thought that twins were a throwback to pack animals. Not the twins themselves just that we still have multiple eggs every month in women. Packs are often known by the way they think alike. Good Luck keep writing ,Loved it. |
| 2004-04-14 05:06:33 | Death by fucking ch. 22 (end) | I just got done reading all 12 chapters of this little story...and its great, like one guys said, there was acctually a point where I skipped over the sex. And I was thinking that exact same thing, you should be a professional writer. Hell, maybe you couls even make a new genre, "Sci-Fi romance". |
| 2004-04-18 17:37:00 | Death by fucking ch. 22 (end) | That was a great story I just finished reading all 22 It was intresting you made the theories all to long and jumbled and is the fact that the suthors name Andrew Wiggin I think its false thats a character out of the book Enders game |