| 2007-04-22 16:16:39 |
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dude..give writing up..that was terrible. first of all, you don't know how to create a plot for your story and second, you had sooo many spelling errors. your last sentence even: "waiting for me know i was in college and on my own." umm shouldn't the "know" be a "now." go back to 1st grade dude and learn how to spell and write with good grammar. |
| 2007-04-22 16:53:36 |
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agreed |
| 2007-04-22 18:46:45 |
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how is that a "tru" story, when somehow you shot a couple loads into her mouth, WITHOUT removing the condom? |
| 2007-04-22 18:57:27 |
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ok i guess ill double check my spelling for the reader that wants me to go back to the first grade. and i give the second reader every play by play...and if it a true story why do u need a plot for something that happened that u recalled.....but then again you guys are the expert..hahahahahahahahah |
| 2007-04-23 00:58:37 |
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forget my last comment if another person says its really that bad ill take it down and never write again...its no fun if no one like it so just say the word and it will be gone |