| 2007-04-22 22:58:15 |
The girl of my dreams.
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To be honest, the story was not without it's share of heat, but with at LEAST one spelling, transpositional, tense or grammatical error in EVERY single sentence, I could not finish it. I have been told in the past to take more time. You should follow that advice as well. Sorry. 1/10 |
| 2007-04-23 02:21:56 |
The girl of my dreams.
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ok, there were some grammatical errors in this story, but thats not a reason to give this story a 1/10 :( . This story is hot, 9/10 Looking forward to part2! |
| 2007-04-23 02:28:15 |
The girl of my dreams.
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Great story! Great ending! Fuck the stupid errors 10/10 |
| 2007-04-23 22:25:16 |
The girl of my dreams.
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good story line, but you should learn how to use spell check- its not that hard to correct spelling errors, and it makes reading a story so much better. 8/10 |
| 2007-04-24 14:01:38 |
The girl of my dreams.
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hey i can relate to you, could never spell myself. good story 8/10 |