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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-22 22:54:12 | A not so boring weekend | Okay you asked for it! “damn that first dance was no fluke, you’re a very hot dancer” Jason said between gulps “why thank you, your not to bad yourself you know” “thank you very much, though I do have one problem” “what is that?” Naomi asked, hoping she hadent done something wrong Jason leaned in close to her ear and said “now I have this huge hard on and no way to get rid of it” CAPITALS & PERIODS he 8” cock pumping he thrusts were more jerky HIS PROFF READ YOUR OWN WORK THE NEXT DAY THEN POST IT. |
| 2007-04-23 06:53:58 | A not so boring weekend | it was good but work n poof reading |
| 2007-04-23 16:59:25 | A not so boring weekend | yeah i know, im not the best with grammer and near the end i was just tired at 4am and wanted to finsih writing, thanks though |
| 2007-04-26 02:50:03 | A not so boring weekend | teen female/teen female? |
| 2007-09-04 18:17:49 | A not so boring weekend | Me lookie for teenie lezzie. No lezzie here. Me no likie. Other than that, though, not bad. Paragraphs need work, though. And grammar, and what fbailey says below. |