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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-08-23 06:10:57 | driving lessons chapter three | keep writting please, maybe see could get knocked-up |
| 2007-11-30 10:45:15 | My Summer Boss chapter 3 | I’m sorry but you start out by apologizing. Lets see...try to ignore the emotional back and forth I'm still working on that. 4 will be fun. Oh and give me a break over the ending I know it sucks. I'm not good with endings. If you are working on the emotional stuff why did you post it? If you are not happy with the ending why did you post it? Shouldn’t you be happy with your story first so that we will be happy reading it? |
| 2007-11-30 10:59:23 | My Summer Boss chapter 3 | i dont really like the whole kelly part of the story,,, the incest is good in "my sister ashley" but i dont know why you're bringing it in in this story too, i dont really like it, i'd prefere if you kept it with eve and brooke, but i geuss it's too late now... other than that im loving the story and cant wait til the next installment :P |
| 2007-11-30 11:18:54 | My Summer Boss chapter 3 | can't wait for part four ...8/10 |
| 2007-11-30 14:30:22 | My Summer Boss chapter 3 | dont worry about incest it wont happen its just a challenge that he has to overcome lol u know conflict. fbaily i dont like one or two parts i like the story as a whole, its hard to explain. i have certain things that i want to happen and you can probably tell which those are, but the stuff in between usually comes up short of my expectations...again hard to explain. you wouldnt know. gonna be awhile |