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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-01-04 21:38:26 | Babysitting with Tara pt.1 | Part #2 please. 'nuff said! |
| 2008-03-05 06:52:12 | Babysitting with Tara pt.1 | great story |
| 2008-03-30 01:13:04 | Babysitting with Tara pt.1 | this is as short as dick |
| 2007-04-25 14:26:07 | Fulfilling my boyfriend's fantasy | It is an interesting story. Personally I do not like reading stories told from the 1st person. I like reading it from the 3rd person singular, as in: As Jamie came in the door with her long coat, John quickly grabbed her by the throat, etc. As a first story, it was good. Keep writing! |
| 2007-04-25 15:56:41 | Fulfilling my boyfriend's fantasy | quite good just please don't write in present, it's much nicer to read a story in past tense as in: I WAS standING at your...... |