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2007-04-25 20:16:24 Fulfilling my boyfriend's fantasy thanks for the feedback!! =)

sorry about the present tense, that's just part of my writing style. I'll remember for next time!

and regarding the first person, when i was writing it, i was reliving it, so it didn't occur to me to change it, sorry. Thanks for the encouragement!
2007-04-26 02:59:43 Fulfilling my boyfriend's fantasy this is the fucking story i have ever read in my life
2007-04-26 05:31:24 Fulfilling my boyfriend's fantasy This was a very good story, and unlike other stories that claim to be true, this one sounded like the real thing.
Like others, I don't generally like 1st person narratives, but again, it was a great read and my gf really got off on it.
We look forward to more of your stories. Thanks for sharing.
2007-04-26 09:28:18 Fulfilling my boyfriend's fantasy I made the first comment about your use of 1st person. As you can see from the 2nd comment, some people do like the use of the 1st person. So please, if you are more comfortable using 1st person, then do so. Just keep writing! PLEASE.
2007-05-14 22:39:05 Fulfilling my boyfriend's fantasy well now aren't you just the best little fuck toy NEEXT sweetie
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