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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-04-30 22:58:51 | DADA's lil girl goes shopping | I am becomming known for my ratings on this site. As for this one. It made no damn sense. |
| 2004-05-10 02:29:41 | DADA's lil girl goes shopping | The first person point of view messed things up, as well as the present tense timing. Also, it was super unrealistic; security would be called for that kind of lewd behaviour, but then its a story so who cares. Work a little harder next time. |
| 2004-05-12 00:07:15 | DADA's lil girl goes shopping | this is not bad for the work of a ten year old. mabey if you took some uper level english classes you would be able to wright a decent story this is so bad it gets a 1/10 from me its funny though it sucks so much that its funny |
| 2004-05-12 17:14:35 | DADA's lil girl goes shopping | damn man yo bull shit story pice of shit just like kenny the lover u mush beat off 50 times a day what u cant get pussy bitch |
| 2004-05-17 12:01:18 | DADA's lil girl goes shopping | I think with a little more time and a high school education this story could be a real story, but until then go back to writing fortune cookie quotes. |