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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-27 15:44:39 | Babysitting with Tara pt.2 | The chapter was quite hot. A little more discription of the lovers might have helped such as hair color, eye color etc. Perhaps a bit more discription of the room and furnishings would help the reader get a clearer picture of where we are. There were a few errors, mostly due to relying too much on the good old spell checker. However, overall a goode effort. Keep writing. |
| 2007-06-27 01:16:14 | Babysitting with Tara pt.2 | good start for a series. interesting subject you've started here. when do we get chapter 3? 8/10 thanx |
| 2007-08-29 16:30:38 | Babysitting with Tara pt.2 | you nearly tipped me over but we need more actual action or some more people 7/10 |
| 2007-05-01 08:42:28 | Payment: first time | After a great build up the sex was over too quickly. |
| 2007-05-01 10:02:03 | Payment: first time | I agree... Way too short with the sex part.. good though.. more details... good spelling... 7/10 thats what i can give with such dissapointment... btw.. I dont think its possible that it wont hurt on a virgin :O |