| 2007-06-16 18:07:48 |
myfirst experience
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You complain about his grammer yet you spell it wrong. |
| 2007-10-02 16:26:51 |
myfirst experience
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this story is another terrorist attack from pakistan. |
| 2007-12-04 16:40:32 |
myfirst experience
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mate, are you alright? |
| 2007-12-26 09:48:43 |
myfirst experience
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Dude, paragraphs would seriously increase your ratings. That's all I have to complain about though. 7/10 |
| 2007-05-03 07:05:39 |
Weekends With Dad
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wheres the magic, wizards, dragons, and such. THIS IS NOT FANTASY!!! this is FICTION! |