| 2007-05-03 18:25:46 |
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This was a horrible story, Please dont write anymore |
| 2007-05-04 03:38:22 |
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Liked it. Keep it up. |
| 2007-05-08 13:08:21 |
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as she lifted one leg and the slit stretched up a bit squished between the two legs right next to each other yet one leg being raised - WHAT THE HELL? try writing something that makes sense |
| 2007-05-16 18:07:08 |
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How can you have an orgasm just from kissing? |
| 2007-05-17 02:07:09 |
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Waaaaay too much technical detail. It read like a users' manual for a bit. Great premise though. 7/10. |