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2007-06-04 22:56:15 I could not help myself im 13 and i can write better

spell check is your friend

as are quotation marks "..."
2007-06-25 16:43:41 I could not help myself SICK FUCK WHO CANT WRITE TO SAVE HIS LIFE STOP WASTIN PEALES TIME .... HERE IS AN IDEA FOR YOUR NEXT STORIE DONT WRITE IT FAG
2007-06-25 18:01:35 I could not help myself Listen, i winced every time i read THIS ANNOYING CAPS LOCK. i winced even more when I reached the end. Pregnant at 14?!!
2007-07-08 19:39:42 I could not help myself im fifteen... i liked it, made me cum... but then again i was really horny so anything would have made me cum at that point...
2007-07-13 03:49:42 I could not help myself I'm well aware of what the story topic is supposed to be about. Firstly,There's no comparrison to a story that tells of a first time fling where a young woman gets "deflowered" and looses her virginity. Note: I said "young woman". NOT a baby girl that's 11 years old!!! Secondly, what limp noodled dickhead thinks about writing a story that's having anything to do with a dad that rapes his little 11 year-old girl in the first place? Create a story that may be incestuous using a sibbling/cousin or for a much better story line, use the postman, milkman,a passer byer in a small po-dunk town, but not the daddy of a minor child!!! And them lastly, get a good old fashioned book that has a word that says "dictionary" and I might even offer you two more books very handy to those that wish to write. One is "wi
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