| 2007-07-13 04:38:12 |
I could not help myself
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The other two books to read for writing are Strunk and Wright "WRITING STYLES", and the other would be called a WEBSTER'S THESAURUS a book of synonyms and antonyms. Of course you may want to have a high-school education/equivalance might do, or higher education to understand what you're reading, to help you out in your next writings!!! Better yet, go back to Pre-school!!! |
| 2007-08-13 04:08:49 |
I could not help myself
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the story was probably about the writer just changed it to be him. the father should of been arested for rape. |
| 2007-08-16 18:05:09 |
I could not help myself
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Learn to use quotation marks. There is absolutely no excuse for this atrocity which is posing as an erotic story. I must concur with the reader who stated that he/she was 13 and could "write better", because I know that I sure as heck was turning out better work than this when I was 13. |
| 2008-02-12 00:31:29 |
I could not help myself
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It was an alright story but man learn how to spell man... Plus it was too short with not enough details you said what they did but not how they did it or anything i'm not saying give up just try a little harder next time. |
| 2007-05-06 12:25:44 |
One Night she will never forget
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no comment |