| 2007-12-05 16:25:39 |
Special Babysitters
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is tyson a dog or a boy? is loni a dog or a girl. its fucking confusin an use smaller paragraphs |
| 2007-05-08 08:17:43 |
A TRUE RAPE
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dude....wtf, u cant spell 4 shit |
| 2007-05-08 12:50:25 |
A TRUE RAPE
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I like the idea behind it, but you need more detail about the sex. More than just they did it and came. I want to hear about how they tortured her. Good start. |
| 2007-05-08 14:23:35 |
A TRUE RAPE
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same as below really. great idea but you need to check your spelling and include more detail. |
| 2007-05-08 16:58:44 |
A TRUE RAPE
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decent story! needs more details though. |