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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-11 17:53:30 | a thug's passion | Ckmon blood diz shit aint slappin u ckan't talk like diz for a sex story hahah but it was tite doe |
| 2007-05-11 20:14:58 | a thug's passion | I'm sure it'd be great if I could understand what it was saying. The whole thing was a huge run on sentence.. |
| 2007-05-13 08:42:16 | a thug's passion | Learn to write, or at least know that "da" is only a sign of ignorance. |
| 2007-05-14 19:50:23 | a thug's passion | OMG! No sentences, grammar was ridiculous, spelling horrendous. If you want to tell a story, have the decency to write it in an understandable form. I tried my best to read it all BUT I actually caught a real headache. I wouldn't recommend that you try writing sex stories again, or any type of stories for that matter. -Kitty_Labella |
| 2007-06-07 20:27:55 | a thug's passion | Take a breath delbin |