| 2007-05-15 14:35:13 |
Kalla: Ch. 5
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I really wished there was more. This story, besides the whole usurping thing that really turned me off (good plot though), was really good, personally |
| 2007-05-17 00:09:08 |
Kalla: Ch. 5
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i gotta agree w/ the other 2 ppl, i realy like this story. good plot and char.s and some nice action. 2 thumbs up, write more. |
| 2008-02-24 21:50:35 |
Kalla: Ch. 5
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when is he nest chapter coming? |
| 2008-02-24 21:52:00 |
Kalla: Ch. 5
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when is the next chapter coming?* |
| 2007-05-13 10:37:33 |
real anal story
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Terrible, bad spelling, bad punctuation, bad paragraphing. |