| 2007-08-03 10:43:14 |
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good start for the series. i s'pose you get 'em all before sunrise? again great story
8/10
thanx |
| 2007-08-03 12:56:51 |
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Story started out pretty good but then it went from "maybe true" to
"pure bullshit." I guess this is just another of your fantasies but don't try to convince us readers that it's true. As soon as you told us about taking your cock out of her ass and shoving it into her mouth, I stopped reading. Gave this story a 3/10. Getting only 9 votes out of 616 readers should tell you that the readers did not like the story--Especially the ending. I would rewirite if I were you. |
| 2007-08-03 14:19:46 |
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True! bollocks! too much cumming in too little time, I know that some of the best sex you can have is in your mind, but this was just fantasy gone mad. |
| 2007-08-04 00:47:06 |
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reader #12.56 it is really odveouse that you do not watch much porn because they do ass to mouth all the time so get your facts streight then credasize some body ok f face |
| 2007-08-04 20:23:13 |
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yea im gonna have to agree w/ #00:47. #12:56 is def. a douche bag. good work |