| 2007-05-26 03:25:40 |
Betty 2
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Just as good as the first one, great stuff! |
| 2007-06-23 13:50:52 |
Betty 2
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keep up the stories |
| 2007-07-01 00:59:10 |
Betty 2
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Love to read a story of Bill getting into Beverly real hard and doing hot old JoAnne. Great story .......... |
| 2007-12-22 00:51:10 |
Betty 2
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That was an amazing story you get some serious props. I have been writing out of bordom and have taken a few pointers on details that are more necessary than I thought would be but make the story soooo much better! I give it a 11/10! |
| 2007-05-14 09:12:22 |
The Dungeon Bitch
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this has great potential more please 10/10 |