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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-14 16:51:52 | Anthonys Mom | ***Twstd&Dmntd4Lfe*** bck at you peeps yet again.......... ""the grammer"" was major issue{deff}......the mom = 28yrs old....hes 14yrs old.......WHAT THE FUCK HELL IS THE FUCKING SHIT......she was 14yearsold preggo.....what the fuck ever ASSSSSSCLOWNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN... |
| 2007-05-14 18:28:30 | Anthonys Mom | yea dude it was a good fantasy but way un realistic and it seems you couldnt make up ur mind whether to make it a third person or a first person so for future reference make sure ur not saying I when its not in quotes or dont talk in third person |
| 2007-05-15 08:25:09 | Anthonys Mom | in every one of these stories some one has to be a damn english teacher that really sucks get a job at school i gave it a 10/10 |
| 2007-05-15 14:13:42 | Anthonys Mom | instead of say her, you kept saying he , as in he boobs were bouncing around check your grammar and spelling |
| 2007-05-15 22:01:23 | Anthonys Mom | The story has good content. It is too short and he was fucking her to soon--Not enough build up even though they 69nd for a while. All writers on this website aren't English teachers but some write as though they don't understand sex or are just uneducated. The writer should rewrite the story and follow some suggestions made by the readers. Gave it a 7/10. |