| 2007-05-16 13:30:50 |
Jades Mothers Day Gift
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it was good but use spell check and read it back first |
| 2007-05-16 17:19:05 |
Jades Mothers Day Gift
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Can't read this with all the poor spelling and grammar. this is worse than fiction. You better give up trying to write. Readers don't want something as bad as this in front of them. Gave it a 1. |
| 2007-05-16 23:22:07 |
Jades Mothers Day Gift
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You are indeed a stupid fuck |
| 2007-05-16 23:38:48 |
Jades Mothers Day Gift
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its ok, how did it help her mom she shouldve ate her mom out, she knda sounds like a jade i know.. |
| 2007-05-17 14:03:46 |
Jades Mothers Day Gift
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Proof read and spell check. |