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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-18 02:58:23 | Jades Mothers Day Gift | What? Huh? Thats it? No more? kind of short, don't you think? So much potential, but the work of a lousy amature. 5/10. |
| 2007-05-18 09:43:39 | Jades Mothers Day Gift | this was so stupid. sounds like the spiderman family situation at the beginning, poor spelling too. |
| 2007-06-04 15:42:23 | Jades Mothers Day Gift | you blow |
| 2007-05-16 06:48:53 | Zack and John | to short but good keep it up 9-10 |
| 2007-05-16 07:18:37 | Zack and John | Bad, bad, bad. Couldn't get past about the first 10 sentences. Your getting the characters confused. Some of the wording is very familiar to another cocksucking story that I have read--Almost word for word. Gave it a 3--Content was pretty good. |