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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-16 11:18:48 | my love story | Poorly written, needs punctuation, paragraphing and capitalization. |
| 2007-05-16 12:46:04 | my love story | fucking hell sort your spelling out |
| 2007-05-16 20:52:14 | my love story | Need Spaces In between Each Line, I Didn't Even Bother Reading It |
| 2007-05-17 14:09:08 | my love story | how old are 10?? |
| 2007-05-17 15:59:42 | my love story | very hard to read and all the single letters for works. shows very poor writing. try reading some of the other stories that are wrote proper. |