| 2007-05-17 09:45:26 |
My Hottie
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Not bad could have been longer if you do make a new one make it longer i gave it a 9/10 because it was short. But still pretty good |
| 2007-05-17 10:06:11 |
My Hottie
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Good start and part 2 could be even better. Get rwriting! |
| 2007-05-17 10:48:03 |
My Hottie
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Next time it's Jess' turn to enjoy th fun of fucking. |
| 2007-05-17 10:48:16 |
My Hottie
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not bad but not to good too could do beeter |
| 2007-05-17 18:09:52 |
My Hottie
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Very good! i enjoyed it because it doesnt completly end it keeps you wantin more. start writing! |