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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-19 15:24:07 | Sex with best friend | learn to spell and slow down a bit. give more details and make it longer. if you can do that i can see you doing well. |
| 2007-05-19 15:42:51 | Sex with best friend | 3reasons why this sucked 1. horrible spelling 2. you need learn to use paragraphs. 3. slow down. dont just rush to the sex scene. take some time and build up. if we all wanted to blow out loads fast we would jerk off/finger bang our selfs to pictures. not take the time to read somthing and enjoy it |
| 2007-05-20 09:23:27 | Sex with best friend | Shall I point out the irony of the reader who commented on the spelling, yet spelt "potential" incorrectly? |
| 2007-05-20 17:29:58 | Sex with best friend | Actually two of the people that complained of spelling errors misspelt a word. (our selfs) But they weren't writing a story now were they? |
| 2007-05-21 01:52:10 | Sex with best friend | Alright, we need to have a talk. You need to slow down, alot! Build it up. You could do well with this but more detail! also spell check is there for a reason |