| 2007-12-22 21:43:54 |
A True Friend
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youre an amazing author, you should write more of this story...its just like love and basketball, or brown sugar, or the playas ball...i really enjoy all of your stories. i look foward to reading anything you post in the future. i havent read a story written by you yet that didnt deserve at least an 8 or 9, but honestly, most of them (including this one) are 10's. the only thing i suggest is proofreading a little bit more because you have a lot of tiny grammatical and detail mistakes. nothing too big though, we all get the picture. and i like how detailed you get about your characters sexual sensations, but a lot of them are common to a few of your stories, so maybe you could look for a new way to describe pleasure? just a suggestion. keep up the good work! |