| 2007-06-30 00:51:00 |
1st time pt 4
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reader 16:13 can't read a story and enjoy it for the plot. all he/she knows how to do is try to teach proper english. Hey Critic have you written any stories? Why not sign your name so others can contact you directly and call you a fool instead of telling me over and over what an ass you are. |
| 2008-04-09 23:34:48 |
1st time pt 4
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Great story. In a sequel get Clair and Tammy pregnut Have a regular three way fuck fwst and many children. |
| 2007-05-23 13:54:02 |
Passions Breath
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Fucking a... i couldn't understand half of it. Whats with the mixed languages this is a Uk site not a Islam site. Please use proper English... I give it a 1/10 because i cannot give it less =( |
| 2007-05-23 14:13:36 |
Passions Breath
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thats japaneese dumbass and thers a translation 2 fuk nut |
| 2007-05-24 16:22:45 |
Passions Breath
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What the Hell ? |